Breathing

September 1, 2009
By costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead


Breathing easily beside me in the cool of the morning, I wonder what i have done to deserve someone as loving as you.I didn't win the Olympics or a gold medal for you. But as you shift slightly taking in the cool morning air, I realize that I didn't have to do all those things to have you. All I needed to do was to love you as you loved me and we will be happy forever.



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on Dec. 28 2010 at 12:12 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
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AWwww I absolutely loved this!! Great work!

on Nov. 19 2009 at 6:42 am
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

Thankyou!!!!! haha

You've made my day.lol

on Nov. 18 2009 at 5:01 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

*cues tears of joy* that is so amazing!!! :D

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 2:34 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Very beautiful, very simple, very elegant. On a whole, it was a very nice piece. Keep writing.

God bless,

...,

liblib33 GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 11:54 am
liblib33 GOLD, Dedham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Life sucks then you die-- yeah I should be so lucky.
--Jacob "Breaking Dawn"

I love this poem! Beautiful, and so truee

hellogirl GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 5:54 pm
hellogirl GOLD, La Habra, California
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I really truly loved it the way you described what good love is. Also next time I will post some of my poems so check them out and tell me what you think about my work

By=)

on Sep. 5 2009 at 3:12 pm
Lyzelovsbublz, Alma, Colorado
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This is like really good. I might be posting some so check them out.

Soon2bRN said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 1:36 am
I found this site through another site we had to use in school and I really enjoyed the poems, stories and art

on Sep. 5 2009 at 1:13 am
Frenchfrylicious, Grizzly Flats, California
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Favorite Quote:
You can do anything you put your mind to!

Wow I love how you write this it is completely true!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 9:34 pm
BounciestCheese BRONZE, Eaton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Just Do It

I love it :)

on Sep. 4 2009 at 3:42 pm
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

Thankyou!!!!!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 3:41 pm
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

Thankyou!!!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 3:41 pm
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

thank you!!!!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 11:09 am
keyboard_musican SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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THATS AMAZING :) :) :)

on Sep. 4 2009 at 9:58 am
BlondieIsBlonde GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is what you make it"

aww... I like this!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 9:05 am
x.kelly.x BRONZE, Wherethewildthingsare., Other
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This amazed me. Keep up the good work! (:


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