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Breathing easily beside me in the cool of the morning, I wonder what i have done to deserve someone as loving as you.I didn't win the Olympics or a gold medal for you. But as you shift slightly taking in the cool morning air, I realize that I didn't have to do all those things to have you. All I needed to do was to love you as you loved me and we will be happy forever.



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purple_ashes said...
Dec. 28, 2010 at 12:12 pm
AWwww I absolutely loved this!! Great work!
 
~*el-oh-vee-ee*~ said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 5:01 pm
*cues tears of joy* that is so amazing!!! :D
 
costarican93 replied...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 6:42 am
Thankyou!!!!! haha
You've made my day.lol
 
Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 2:34 pm
Very beautiful, very simple, very elegant. On a whole, it was a very nice piece. Keep writing.
God bless,
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Libby M. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 11:54 am
I love this poem! Beautiful, and so truee
 
hellogirl said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 5:54 pm
I really truly loved it the way you described what good love is. Also next time I will post some of my poems so check them out and tell me what you think about my work
By=)
 
Lyze W. said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 3:12 pm
This is like really good. I might be posting some so check them out.
 
Soon2bRN said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 1:36 am
I found this site through another site we had to use in school and I really enjoyed the poems, stories and art
 
Frenchfrylicious said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 1:13 am
Wow I love how you write this it is completely true!
 
Tawny K. said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 9:34 pm
I love it :)
 
keyboard_musican said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 11:09 am
THATS AMAZING :) :) :)
 
Katherine H. replied...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 3:41 pm
thank you!!!!
 
BlondieIsBlonde said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 9:58 am
aww... I like this!
 
Katherine H. replied...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 3:41 pm
Thankyou!!!
 
Kellyy S. said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 9:05 am
This amazed me. Keep up the good work! (:
 
Katherine H. replied...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 3:42 pm
Thankyou!!!!!
 
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