Breathing easily beside me in the cool of the morning, I wonder what i have done to deserve someone as loving as you.I didn't win the Olympics or a gold medal for you. But as you shift slightly taking in the cool morning air, I realize that I didn't have to do all those things to have you. All I needed to do was to love you as you loved me and we will be happy forever.
purple_ashesAWwww I absolutely loved this!! Great work!
~*el-oh-vee-ee*~*cues tears of joy* that is so amazing!!! :D
Jaquie
Very beautiful, very simple, very elegant. On a whole, it was a very nice piece. Keep writing.
God bless,
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God bless,
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Libby M. I really truly loved it the way you described what good love is. Also next time I will post some of my poems so check them out and tell me what you think about my work
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This is like really good. I might be posting some so check them out.
Soon2bRN said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 1:36 am:
Sept. 5, 2009 at 1:36 am:
I found this site through another site we had to use in school and I really enjoyed the poems, stories and art
Wow I love how you write this it is completely true!
THATS AMAZING :) :) :)
BlondieIsBlondeaww... I like this!
Kellyy S. This amazed me. Keep up the good work! (:
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