Big Mouth, little words MAG

July 1, 2009
By Joanna Loewenstein BRONZE, Ridgewood, New Jersey
Joanna Loewenstein BRONZE, Ridgewood, New Jersey
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Inevermetsomeone
Whocouldtalksofast
Andsaynexttonothing
Insuchanurgentmanner.

I NEVER MET SOMEONE
WHO COULD TALK SO LOUD
AND YET SPEAK SO SOFTLY
I COULD BARELY HEAR.

I … like … never … um … met … ­someone …
who … could … uh … think … so … much …
and … like … say … hmm … so … little …
that … I … er … saw … no … point … to … it …

!!!I!!!never!!!met!!!someone!!!
?who?could?use?tons?of?punctuation?
!?and!?express!?no!?emotion!?
… it … sounded … like … m-o-n-o-t-o-n-e …

I never met someone
who could fake it so well
and fail so miserably
that I stopped believing.

DidYOUum!!!hear

that?



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savina GOLD said...
on Sep. 7 2009 at 12:42 pm
savina GOLD, Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
" Dont try to bull crap a bull crapper becuase they know all about the bull crapping".- my ap enviromental science teacher

My favorite poem, it is so different. Great job

on Sep. 4 2009 at 5:47 pm
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

LOVED IT!!!!

made me smile. :D

on Sep. 1 2009 at 1:12 am
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

this poem is great. it's really original and has a special rythm.

Shuck'a corn said...
on Aug. 27 2009 at 1:55 am
this was a wicked good poem. im not much of a poet but this was incredible. very interesting and creative format. props to u.

ghillygirl17 said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 9:15 pm
i really liked how you could say different things but all relating to the same thing, bad conversation with no soul in it

on Aug. 26 2009 at 8:20 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

wowww this was really good. haha. it made me laugh but it was really AWESOME! :)

on Aug. 25 2009 at 11:51 pm
ohmygoshthiswaslikesosogood. Ha Ha just kidding, but really, you got some talent goin. Great idea and you really made it work on the page.

Spritz said...
on Aug. 24 2009 at 1:56 pm
Spritz, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
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Haaaa, this was awesome! xD I enjoyed it alotttt. And yes, i heard you, loud and clear (:

on Aug. 19 2009 at 1:29 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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interesting

~*!HA!*~ said...
on Aug. 18 2009 at 12:00 am
Wow that was an amazing poem. Unique in a good way. Keep writing!

on Aug. 14 2009 at 12:59 am
anonymousfish BRONZE, Wentzville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Like I always say, there is no 'I' in TEAM... there's a 'ME' though, if you jumble it up. -House

(this is totally a compliment) you remind me of shel silverstien, he's totally like my favorite poet....

Ryelle Sanar said...
on Aug. 12 2009 at 11:02 pm
I think that this poem expresses plenty of emotion in a fresh angle that is raw to the eyes, but not in an entirely bad way at all. A person can hear the poet's words in a mimicry of the subjects', and the two blend together quite well. Overall, very unique, and I loved it. Keep 'em coming!

on Aug. 11 2009 at 10:41 am
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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wow, this poem was amazing. totally unique and it's own. love it, keep writing!

on Aug. 8 2009 at 3:36 pm
Eilina Sealtman SILVER, London, Other
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It sure was interesting...

on Aug. 7 2009 at 9:30 pm
Faithband3 BRONZE, Westbury, New York
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Good job. Nice message in the writing.

on Jul. 29 2009 at 6:04 pm
**alwaysbeme** BRONZE, Valparaiso, Indiana
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truely wonderfull keep up the good work! you expressed yourself very well :)

E.Lee GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2009 at 3:14 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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its really unique and funni!

i liked it alot:D:D ur very talented.

and while reading it..it was as if i could hear exactly what u were talking about:) lol good job

Lostinbooks said...
on Jul. 24 2009 at 7:12 pm
Lostinbooks, Arcadia, California
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This is wonderful. I love how each section SHOWS the way it's describing the talking. And at the end, all is confusion, until the last word. The simplicity of the last word's plain font is kind of cool. The way you wrote the poem makes it so much more powerful... Excellent!

on Jul. 23 2009 at 10:09 pm
Pink_Butterfly, FC, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Never say there is nothing beautiful in the world anymore. There is always something to make wonder in the shape of a tree, the trembling of a leaf."
- Albert Schweitzer.

This poem was defiantly something unique, I've never seen a poem written that way before, it's super creative. Great job, keep up the good work ! :)

on Jul. 23 2009 at 9:52 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

WooooooooooooooooooooooooooW!!! This is my favorite piece of all time. I absolutely loved it! It is amusing and it is so creative. Great job!!


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