fried MAG

June 23, 2009
By Genevieve Chasty BRONZE, Andover, New Jersey
Genevieve Chasty BRONZE, Andover, New Jersey
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I need
to hatch.

For I have
been in here
far too long.

rotted
hours.

rotted
days.

I cannot
move.

I cannot
make a single
sound.

Crack
this shell

or these whites
will glue
me
down.



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on Jun. 27 2013 at 4:50 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

If I was ever trapped inside an egg, these would be my thoughts! Great poem, funny too~

on Jun. 8 2011 at 1:19 pm
cassxxx8 BRONZE, Northport, New York
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l-o-v-e-d it.

on Jul. 26 2009 at 1:33 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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its a good topic, a good use of words, i liked it tons.

on Jul. 17 2009 at 4:31 pm
yourworstnightmare BRONZE, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The best prize that life offers is the chance to work hard at work worth doing. (Teddy Roosevelt)

Okay. That was interesting. I loved the style you wrote it in. Awesome! Keep Writing!

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on Jul. 13 2009 at 8:52 pm
LilJ<3 GOLD, Gloucester, Virginia
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i believe this poem can be interpreted many ways. great job. i wish the best of luck in the rest of your writing!

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on Jul. 8 2009 at 2:26 pm
SaraB. GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one" Abraham Lincoln

I love the egg metaphor. I can totally relate, but probably not in the same context in which you wrote it.

on Jun. 24 2009 at 9:47 pm
KennisLora GOLD, Palm Harbor, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A hero is no braver than an ordinary man, but he is braver five minutes longer. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson

awesome! I love your stanzas, and how the line breaks add to the tension.


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