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A Place in Time MAG

By Rachel S., Warwick, NY

And even though we said
Always and forever
Midsummer butterflies
Left us feeling invincible
Laughing together
Hearts in hand
Playing our guitars
And even though we said
Forever and always
It may just’ve been a place in time
Just because we said
Our love would last longer than forever
And we’d live like queens and kings
Of passion blooming like sun fairies
Whispering stories
Of the moon’s untold
Just because it seemed
Flawless, perfect sunrise
It still might’ve only been a place in time
And now our love is over
Now you’ve gone
Broken pieces of my heart
Shattered on the floor
Heaving pile of huddled masses
Screaming songs of bitterness
Even though it seems that the world has ended
It may only be just a place in time

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i love this so much!

on Dec. 16 2011 at 9:57 pm
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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This was a really good poem

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on Mar. 12 2011 at 9:57 am
blackstarsx3, Bronx, New York
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this is AMAZING. [: