Crush MAG

By Sarah B., Mountain Home, AR

     Interest Introduces
Curiosity’s Curse.
Shyness Showers
Love with Loneliness.
Hoodwinked Hope,
Decorated with Desire.
Panoramic Panic and
Jeering Jealousy
Develops into Depression.
Disgust and Disappointment
Feed off of Fear.
Humiliation is Hushed.
Reason? Rejection.
Embodied with Emptiness,
Confounded and Confused.
Happiness Hardened,
Heart Helpless




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i love this so much!

on Dec. 31 2016 at 10:38 am
Black_Pool BRONZE, Al Sharjah, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Everything is beautiful but beautiful isn't everything.

It has good depth :)

on Mar. 22 2013 at 4:28 pm
BrokenSoul5 GOLD, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Sonny, true love is the greatest thing in the world-except for a nice MLT - mutton, lettuce, and tomato sandwich, where the mutton is nice and lean and the tomato is ripe [smacks his lips] they're so perky, I love that.
~Miracle Max

I agree with Denetria, it was a little too much alliteration but I did like the meaning of it.

on Feb. 26 2011 at 6:12 pm
far.from.you. GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" She completly fell for him, but he didnt even stumble...</3" -unknown.

wow(: that was awesome.

on May. 20 2010 at 9:47 pm
I must say that this poem has a wonderful concept behind it. I just think that you might have been able to write it a little better....

on May. 20 2010 at 7:10 pm
olympian-queen, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Yesterday is history. Tommorrow is a mystery. And today? Today is a gift that's why they call it the present.

too much alliteration but really good concept though.

on Mar. 6 2009 at 11:17 pm
I like how true this is. :)

I don't know if I should be putting a smilie next to that statement, but whatever. It was good. *thumbs up*

Simple, yet meaningful.


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