Accordion MAG

By Kiran W., Queens Village, NY

      play the accordion

and I’ll watch as your fingers

sway across the cream-colored keys

it’s so beautiful, I close my eyes and

all I can hear are your lovely harmonies

being played like you’ve never stopped

you take me away from this four-walled room

into the forest where violet flowers are dancing slowly

the green in the grass is rich and soothing

and the sky, I can’t describe ... it’s beyond all the pictures in our heads.

for once let’s just forget all the soil-covered moments

and live in this gold that you’ve created.

play the accordion

and I’ll watch as your fingers

sway across the cream-colored keys



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i love this so much!

on Oct. 11 2009 at 9:30 pm
nevercliche159 BRONZE, Clark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"A man who has nothing to die for, is not fit to live."
--- Martin Luther King Jr.

I think you should use more punctuation so it flows more. I think the poem is really pretty sounding, i think adding punctuation would only add to the awesomeness.

on Sep. 15 2009 at 10:33 pm
ryangallagher BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind." -- Albert Einstein

Good imagery, although I don't understand, why an accordion?

on Sep. 15 2009 at 5:11 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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beautiful...

AmnyR BRONZE said...
on Sep. 15 2009 at 7:43 am
AmnyR BRONZE, Clifton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the whole world. ~unknown

i love everything about this poem!

selina21 said...
on Dec. 8 2008 at 4:55 pm
this poem was pretty dandy!


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