Steak MAG

May 14, 2009
By DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
86 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.


When sleep is chewing at your eyelids,
Do you put down the pen or ignore it?
Does it bore you to see me exploring
While you sit in your corner and watch your TV?
Can you check me for the weather
and the weather check for me?
I need to see if I can cross despair by midnight
in order to reach ignorance by sunrise.
Can you rouse the sun a little later?
Just a little more sleep is my escape.
Please take away the rocks and sticks before I fall.
I'm too tired for this all.
Can't deal with it right now.
Wake me up in the evening with a plate of self-involved,
Slap me with a steak
And let my problems be resolved.
23 past bedtime.
Give me the remote.
No, go to the weather,
WAIT!
Press pause,
Let's just spend some time together.



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on Feb. 22 2013 at 2:02 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

This has very good flow and is really cool to read, good job!

on Mar. 5 2010 at 10:22 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

In some places the rythm got a bit choppy. But besides that...This poem was definately creative and well written dose of truth. :)

on Jan. 6 2010 at 5:44 am
NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates...." (haha got to love Forest Gump)

Much more creative then anything I've ever done.

on Nov. 5 2009 at 11:57 pm
foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM, Redmond, Washington
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I love the imagry and the flow. It is a beautuful poem, please keep writing.


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