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The Ocean

October 30, 2019
By everylastword BRONZE, Mclean, Virginia
everylastword BRONZE, Mclean, Virginia
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The ocean is a dangerous place 
An undercurrent of disastrous thoughts just waiting to spill,
A bottle of spills asking to be swallowed
The ocean has labels:
Drink me 
Don't eat me 
The list goes on as you swim deeper through the list;
You get more and more curious: what does each label do to me?
You can’t stop once you start because it becomes addictive, 
You want to know what secrets the labels hold.
These secrets make you feel so good:
Drink me.
Don’t eat me.


The author's comments:

I wrote as I wanted to compare the ocean's deep, dark waters and dangerous undercurrents to how people deal with eating disorders or substance abuse. 


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