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But Baby,You Are A Goodbye

May 24, 2019
By fayrouztamer BRONZE, Riyadh, Other
fayrouztamer BRONZE, Riyadh, Other
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All those ties,
Nights I stayed up,cries
Memories rehearsing,sirens singing
The worst song of all times

Insecurities &lame heartaches
Sorrow,grieve,and lost sad face
Were the only feeling I couldn't exhale
And thought that I won't be back, again

Like a flower watered with poison,
I still got to be out as naive as possible
But does this happens often?
I asked;They said yes
When you finally know your worth
From all loses;At all costs
You can still implant a rose,
Potent roots,
In the dirtiest shore.

The author's comments:

I am Fayrouz Elbarakawy. I am graduated high school student; I Am 18. Writing had been my best friend since I was eight, specifically poetry was my sibling. I do believe and see that poems are just another type of artistic and verbal communication. My poem is about my breakup and how I came up to a realization,within moving on through this toxic relationship.

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This article has 2 comments.

SamaKamel2K2 said...
on Jun. 7 at 4:35 pm
SamaKamel2K2, Riyadh, Other
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This is the best poem I've ever read. Great job🖤

on Jun. 2 at 2:09 am
Poison_Blossom BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Some must be sacrificed to save others ." -Me

I love how this was written, so descriptive and thought-provoking

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