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The Ballad of Ki'yo Chokma

March 13, 2019
By FlightOfPiscine PLATINUM, Plano, Texas
FlightOfPiscine PLATINUM, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Irony [is] the song of a prisoner who's come to love his cage" - David Foster Wallace


A foggy world in a forehead of tangles

A mountain reaches upwards, peak piercing the clouds

And the threads unravel.

 

In a movement of great inertia

Everything has led up to this

The man's eyes remained open

And his soul sunk into bliss.

 

A network of streamers, strings and loose ends

Collapse in a puff of air

Now his mind could be anywhere.

 

Oh no, it's right here, in fact

Floating around the room

A disjointed cluster of yellow ideas and yellow tears

Tap against motionless balls of white porcelain.

 

With a start, he erupts

Leaps up from the chair

And in ravenous breaths, pulls blood from thin air

In effortless breaths, smoothly rips out his hair

Rips the baby, of course, mother of nowhere

Look inward? Oh, don't, you'll just meet a blank stare

 

His body multiplies

And he takes to the streets

Breaks the bones of a traveler

And the watchman, on his beat

 

Synchronized swimming, this dastardly god

Each Ki'yo Chokma

Now travels abroad

 

But in a twist, it would seem

He still sits right here

His many forms fast-collapsed

Is it really so queer?

 

Splitting fibers forgotten

Sitting, turning to ash

Take a man of pure reason

Make him Hyde from the flash


The author's comments:

With this piece I wanted to paint a picture of perfectly reasonable individuals being whisked into Hydean frenzies unprovoked. The title roughly translates from Chickasaw as "not good" or "bad hello." I didn't want to use a real name in order to preserve the idea that not this not only could be everyone, but that this Ki'yo Chokma person really is everyone.


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on Apr. 27 2019 at 8:03 pm
lhatcher123 BRONZE, Dover, Delaware
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It feels so raw and like everything is coming to life, i love it