Black Night This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

April 20, 2009
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Silent beating
A hidden, frozen heart
Summer birds
A flock glides through Winter
Black Night shapes.

Crescent scythe
Reaper's ancient dagger
Sliver moon
A knife's mirror edge
Black Night shapes.

Deep purring
A shifting nighttime herd
Black-emerald trees
Nocturnal giants move in half-sleep
Black Night shapes.

Soon the disaster of Light
The warriors of Yellow Day will come
Death approaches
The elegance and mystery
Of Black Night will die
And her countless phantoms will
Perish alongside her.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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sedaracapree said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 4:42 pm
Wow. Me and you really do write alot. We use repetition to further get our point across. You should definetly keep writing and never stop. Also, it would be great if you checked out my poems.. well poem.. there's only one. the others are still pending for approval and what not. thanks(:
sedaracapree replied...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 4:42 pm
i meant me and you really do write alike. sorry
Ellie_Michelle said...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 7:54 pm
Whoa. Good job. I don't know what else to say about that. Lol. :)
Jordon.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 3:16 pm
excellent. i love it [:
~Reaa.Mae~ said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 3:04 pm
Well, hey there Mr.Squid.
I loved your poem, keep up the good work! :D
Love, Reaa~!
~Reaa.Mae~ replied...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 3:05 pm
Btw, dnt worry about the "Mr.Squid" part. It means goodstuff where I come from. :)
ShaeMonstahx3 said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 4:42 pm
This is really good (: I love it
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