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Barton Springs

October 15, 2018
By celucille SILVER, Austin, Texas
celucille SILVER, Austin, Texas
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Heat bakes off the pavement.

The fierce sun presses on my bare shoulders,

leaving rosy kisses that will darken tomorrow.

I yearn for the springs.

 

The frigid plunge shocks me

every time. The water of deep

teal swirls around me,

providing a cooling refuge.

 

The turquoise liquid sparkles

with white fractals of the sun.

I allow the warmth of her light

to war with the cold encapsulating me.

 

I begin to go numb, so I

say a wistful farewell

to the sweet water of the springs.

 I carry the chill in my bones all day.

 

Heat bakes off the pavement.

The fierce sun presses on my bare shoulders,

leaving rosy kisses that will darken tomorrow.

I yearn for the springs.


The author's comments:

This poem is about my favorite pool in ATX, Barton Springs. The repetition of the first and last stanza represents how I feel wistful for the springs whether I am coming or going. It's a magical place.


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