Runaway MAG

March 5, 2009
By Ryann. BRONZE, Hastings, Michigan
Ryann. BRONZE, Hastings, Michigan
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Electric hills and mountain tops
Where runaways run far
Just run away with me, my dear
Uncover who we are
Beneath the stars and blanket black
We lie and watch the moon
I’d lie with you forever more
And sing the same night’s tune

I’ll keep you far from war and such
And hold you close tonight
I’ll give you all that I can give
And try to be your light
So run away with me, my dear
And bring me all your love
You’re the girl from all the movies
The one that I’ve dreamt of.


The author's comments:
This poem was writen about a girl who makes me very happy.

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kfratus BRONZE said...
on Aug. 24 2009 at 1:19 am
kfratus BRONZE, Lowell, Massachusetts
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I love the rhyme scheme and how it's not overpowering. I felt light and airy reading this poem, it was very well written :)

on Jul. 18 2009 at 1:10 pm
LivingLiar GOLD, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Lie after lie I die with my soul ravished.

Sweet.

Sly5 said...
on Apr. 1 2009 at 3:13 am
Ryan,

This poem has brought tears to my eyes everytime I read it!:) You have an amazing talent, I have never met anyone like you!

Man that girl you talked about is very lucky!:)

P.S. BEST POEM EVER!

Hayley B. said...
on Mar. 29 2009 at 5:45 pm
Awwwww, Ryan I just love reading what you write and this seriously made me feel very happy kinda like the feeling you get after a happy ending to a love story :)

LeaSmith said...
on Mar. 29 2009 at 5:15 pm
This is really good! I love the emotion that was put into it!





Good luck! <3

Debra C. said...
on Mar. 29 2009 at 4:49 pm
Ryan, this poem is like a little piece of music. What a wonderfully written heartfelt poem. Your words come from a place that only few people ever reach. Great job and dont ever stop writing.

JDarland said...
on Mar. 26 2009 at 2:16 pm
Ryan,

This poem is so soothing and exciting at the same time! Beautiful imagery that captures many of the thoughts we have when we're in love.

You are an amazing writer...can't wait to see your poetry for class!

Mrs. D




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