The Unfinished Entiwining

June 30, 2016
By RajaviMishra GOLD, Noida, Other
RajaviMishra GOLD, Noida, Other
14 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Healing the scars, bearing the pain
Of piercing needle in my heart and brain .
Your presence was like a thread ,
A thread in this needle ,
Weaving the twill of love ,
Which was feeble.

Words were bullets ,
From my loose-lipped mortar.
They razed the strands ,
in twined twill of ardour.

I begrimed the twill ,
You dropped the aiguille ,
It's echoes, I can still hear ,
Even in this flurry chill.

But the needle isn't broken,
It just bent to remain unbroken ,
One cannot remove the traces of time,
Your name is still written in scars of mine.

Come back, let the thread pass through the needle eye,
Let the twill be completely twined.


The author's comments:

Analogies are lovely to be drawn for almost every subject. As for this poem, heartbreak has been related to the analogy of a thread and a needle.


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 4 comments.


on Apr. 7 2017 at 9:21 am
RajaviMishra GOLD, Noida, Other
14 articles 0 photos 4 comments
Thank you so much!!

on Jul. 15 2016 at 10:17 am
RajaviMishra GOLD, Noida, Other
14 articles 0 photos 4 comments
Thank you so much

on Jul. 14 2016 at 1:56 pm
Katyaini SILVER, Greater Noida, Other
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a chocolate covered chilly....

Some succeed because they're destined to;
Most succeed because they're determined too

It's painfully beautiful

Liz123 said...
on Jul. 5 2016 at 3:50 am
Rajavi, This is an amazing piece of poetry.. Write more often.. :)


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!