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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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doverdrama said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 4:11 pm:
i love this so ,much! this perfectly describes howi feel about a guy! i hope you keep writing, youre really good!
 
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aubrey63 said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 3:57 pm:
omg i love this! i think the poem is great, the rhythm the rhyming.... love it! and good job getting it published!!! u have real talent!
check out my stuff and comment so i can improve, too!
 
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Akila_M. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 3:42 pm:
This basically describes somebody in my life this past summer. It's neat how you could gather all those thoughts into such a small space. I like it!
 
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beautifulpeople said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 3:03 pm:
ohmyygolly! that describes this one guy that sits in front of mee in science!!! except he has dirtyy blond hair and he doesn't really notice mee! haha but hunn youu have an AMAZINGG poem:) most girls will fall in love with this
 
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To love and be loved said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 2:11 pm:
OMG i love it it just really describes my life right now and i really hope ur going to keep up the reat work. its really cool to know that there are other people going through the same things as u even though that a not good things most of the time.
 
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liz1800 said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 12:34 pm:
i LIKE THIS POEM:)
 
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Vaaseen R. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 12:07 pm:
I love this poem cause it's so true! There's always that one guy that you end up having the bigest crush on. When you know you shouldn't, cause he's a jerk but you just can't help it...
 
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dylonmichael said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 10:23 am:
i love it i fell in love with a jerk a huge one
 
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Amber1994 said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 9:43 am:
awsome poem!!
-please check out my poems and comment-
 
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Kearston B. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 8:55 am:
oh my god i love this. its so amazing, i can totally relate
 
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romance_lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 8:25 am:
you are amazing. That poem is like.....undescribible. You have talent
 
Black Heart replied...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 10:38 am :
I totally agree. THis was just... undescribavle*wink*
 
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~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 10:18 am:
wow. long scroll to the bottom. lol this was awesome!! Keep up the good work!
 
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nessa_1121 said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 10:36 pm:
omg i love this poem so much i truly relate to this good job :)
 
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Lonleydandy said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 2:42 am:
I honestly don't think I can relate to anything else more than this. I just sat and read it over, and over. This was amazing. I can sooo relate to you on this. They're not a jerk, but are COMPLETELY oblivious!!!!!!
 
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FashionGuru said...
Jun. 9, 2009 at 8:10 pm:
My life, lol. Being in love with the most jerky, best boy friend that you have is tough. Exactly the story of my life. Nice poem!
 
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Stitch said...
Jun. 9, 2009 at 1:58 pm:
this poem is one of kind. when i read it, it seemed like there was a lot more than just what the title suggested.
 
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Shelbz said...
May 22, 2009 at 7:43 am:
story of my life. well put; i like it a lot.
 
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emofreak!!! said...
May 20, 2009 at 11:11 pm:
loved it!!!
n like so meny other people said
who cant relate???
i really like how you kept the rhyme the whole way through
n how the lines just kinda flow together.
G-R-E-A-T!!! XD
 
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MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15, 2009 at 12:29 pm:
WOW a lot of people love ur work, and i must say i 100% whole heartedly agree with everyone it was awesome,,, i'd love 2 hear more! congrats!
 
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