Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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Jamerson said...
on Feb. 11 2016 at 12:10 pm
Jamerson, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't regret anything because at one point it was what you wanted." -Unknown

No, you're right. It is plagerism if she takes credit for it.

DogLover1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2016 at 8:59 pm
DogLover1 GOLD, Olympia, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
The Only Dancer You Should Compare Yourself To, Is The One You Used To Be

Amazing poem!

on Jan. 8 2016 at 1:41 pm
LongLifeStory, Mobile, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
Live every day like its your last.

That was really awesome.

on Jan. 6 2016 at 2:06 pm
Love_Live_Write BRONZE, Kennett Square, Pennsylvania
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This is a really great piece that I honestly love! I really admire how you were able to portray so many emotions in one poem!

on Nov. 29 2015 at 9:35 pm
Caycethepoet SILVER, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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This is so simple, yet so beautiful and relatable. I love it!

on Nov. 10 2015 at 1:15 pm
itss.tere BRONZE, Muskegon, Michigan
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I love this so much ! I can relate to it cause i use to know someone like that. My heart literally hurts cause i'm remembering the amazing memories i had with that guy!

waish SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2015 at 1:27 am
waish SILVER, Ranchi, Other
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wow love this poem. and if you guys have a minute than see this stuff of mine and vote if you like TeenInk.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/836211/Im-Little-Bit-Alive/

on Nov. 5 2015 at 1:28 pm
eitbse@ew BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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“Jerk” Your poems are the ones I like to read. I am a freak for romance. You captured how he looked and traits, so your readers could have a image of what he looked like. You did a great job on this.

on Sep. 2 2015 at 9:23 pm
Literally made my heart hurt. There's a guy that is a total jerk, but I still have a crush on him..... but for me one of the aspects is the delicious cologne..

Merveille GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2015 at 12:51 pm
Merveille GOLD, Fulham, Other
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you have no reason to apologize.Everybody's experience is different.when this happened to me, i looked back and laughed.Why doesn't @CeceE14 say the same to the 24 people who it "MADE ME LAUGH"

on May. 26 2015 at 12:57 am
Caraid56 BRONZE, Moss Vale, Other
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So true! Truly beautiful

babyxrs SILVER said...
on May. 23 2015 at 4:48 pm
babyxrs SILVER, Holtville, California
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing hurts more than being dissapointed by the single person you thought would never hurt you.

Nice work :)

on Apr. 23 2015 at 11:27 am
_Tennessee_Love_ BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
¨the difference between promises and memories, is that we break promise and memories break us.¨

Beautifully written, I can relate to this very well, although the hair color would be changed to red haha, but still a wonderful piece keep up the work!

on Apr. 12 2015 at 1:52 pm
wait, isn't that plagiarism, unless you ask permission or aknowledge them? Or I am I being completely dumb and youre doing something perfectly alright? If you are, im really sorry. -Justwondering

on Apr. 9 2015 at 11:18 pm
dizzypotato_202, San Bernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Your anger is like the bubbles in a can of soda. The more you're shaken, the more you want to let it all out. The longer you keep it in though, the greater the size of the eventual explosion- and the flatter the drink at the end." -Linkin Park

Pretty... love it

on Mar. 4 2015 at 9:27 am
LucifersPhoenix, Tea, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't successful without friends and family. By: Unknown

That kind of describes me if I don't move on right away but yet that was amazing!!

on Feb. 22 2015 at 11:58 am
DragonWriter11 GOLD, Johnston, Iowa
18 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only person in this world who can write your life story is you. Don't hand the pen over to someone else just because they made one chapter miserable."

I can tell that you put your heart into this...... amazing and true...... it's the best poem about heartbreakers that I've read so far. GREAT JOB!!! :)

on Feb. 11 2015 at 9:35 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Again, I'm sorry. I acted before I though, but this is a bad excuse and hardly an excuse and one that I will not hide behind or use. I know that I was not sensitive to that when I was suppose too, and that I should have thought before I acted. I know that it's not funny to have your heart broken or someone else's heart broken. I do not blame you if you think that I am not sensitive and stupid.

on Feb. 11 2015 at 9:26 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I apologize, @CeceE14. I know this is an amazing poem, I find this a phenomenal poem. I know it's not funny to have your heart broken, that I can connect too because I have had my heart broken. I apologize for being stupid and not sensitive to that, I'm sorry.

CeceE14 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 10 2015 at 8:25 pm
CeceE14 BRONZE, Rosemount, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"No."

Beautiful. Too true to explain.




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