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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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VivaciousVirgoVixen said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 8:00 am
Awesome work. I love it!! <3
 
ApolloSun said...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 8:07 am
That was sweet in a funny way! nice!
 
Soleil said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 7:46 pm
I can totally relate to this! Great job!
 
VivarieX said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 3:03 pm
Reminds me of a friend xD
It's awesome :)
 
youngspeare said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 12:51 pm
Christina, this is awesome work! It would make a great song btw..

Request ya'll to check out my work..thanks.
 
ThatsJust-It said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 11:37 pm
Christina whoever you are, this jerk will slowly kill you:) i sure do know how you feel though.
 
raindance72 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 6:59 pm

Great work! Sounds like song lyrics, so rhythmic and catchy. I've looked at some of your other work and I love your style of writing. Wonderful job :)

By the way, if anyone could look at and comment on my work, it would be SO appreciated. :)

 
belieber said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 3:14 pm
i really like this. its like you read my mind. :)
 
taytaynichole said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 4:12 pm
i have read all your poetry and i think you are an AMAZING writer! this is one of my favorites along with Rant <3 your an inspiration and i hope to read more:)
 
. said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 10:44 pm
once again...soooo amazing
 
Fia-fia said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 11:14 pm

First: sooo good, and second: completely relatable! I know exactly what you mean, as many girls can! Thank you

:)

 
SoftlySpoken said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 5:53 pm
This describes some one I know perfectly. Amazing. :)
 
JamieNicole said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:42 pm
Love It! You rock!
 
L.A.Lightning said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 2:21 pm
Thats a very good one. good job.
 
Traceyacey said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 1:23 pm
very good!!!
 
artmantist said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 1:02 pm
awesome poem., Check out my poem too, tnx
 
Wintergrl7 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:31 pm
the beginning was kinda silly, but i loved the last two paragraphs
 
disasterdominant13 replied...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 8:17 am
*um, stanzas? ^^
 
Ella1 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:22 pm

So true! Great job

 

 
ilikeskipping said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 11:15 am
wow this is good. ever thought of turning it into a song?
 
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