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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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CountryCutie said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 6:22 pm:

loved this one:) good job!

 

 
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Desti_B said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 6:05 pm:

i've read this one before and i loved it...lol..but now that i've actually talked to u i like it more lol..

 

 
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wilderose121 said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 7:11 pm:
do you read minds? i like a guy who is a jerk who has brown hair! this is amazing! pls read my song when it gets up, guys and girls!
 
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tweetiebruceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 5:39 pm:
I can totally relate to this! :)
 
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GirlWhoWrote said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 1:28 pm:
Wow! You really wrote this well! Please please please check out my work!!
 
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BridgetND said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 12:32 pm:
could everyone check out my work please? especially my poem "untill =]
 
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Adelle said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 10:39 pm:
I love this because its so relatable! very well writen..and honestly, so incredibly true.
 
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InvisibleHeart said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:30 pm:
 I LOVE this! Very well written and honest. This brought to mind a lot of jerks that I've known. Keep writing, you're doing an excellent job :)
 
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writer101 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:08 pm:
I like it made me laugh a little.Youu tell'em
 
jessicahappy replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 12:17 pm :
i know right it so true
 
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Lunalovesyew said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 5:35 pm:
Omg this is fantastic!! For some reason I picture the trypical crush...taunting you with his ... you know ... jerkiness. Awesome job! I know I'm not being original, but that flowed really well!! The world needs some more simple, strong poems like this. Keep going!
 
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vickilovesyou5 said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 8:12 pm:
That was really good :)
 
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abear23 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 9:26 pm:
This is soo true. it really flows well. keep writing. ur awesome
 
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Sing88 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 8:30 pm:
very well written and descriptive I enjoyed it immensely
 
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JuneTaz said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 5:45 pm:
Love how yu took an insult and mixed it with something romantic and sweet. Really sticks out. Four stars!
 
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DebbieSham said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 5:34 pm:

Haha can totally relate!

Very nice:)

 
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Mary2016 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 5:26 pm:
I've read this poem over and over and I absolutely love it!
 
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jruth said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 1:01 pm:
Excellent poem, I can totally relate to having that feeling about a guy. Check out my work if ya want :). 
 
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aurorairis said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 8:48 am:

Great job! You capture this emotion so perfectly!

Please comment on some of my work!

 
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BriBear94 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 10:22 am:
I love this, it totally relates to what I'm going through right now! nice job!;)
 
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