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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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. said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 10:44 pm
once again...soooo amazing
 
Fia-fia said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 11:14 pm

First: sooo good, and second: completely relatable! I know exactly what you mean, as many girls can! Thank you

:)

 
SoftlySpoken said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 5:53 pm
This describes some one I know perfectly. Amazing. :)
 
JamieNicole said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:42 pm
Love It! You rock!
 
L.A.Lightning said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 2:21 pm
Thats a very good one. good job.
 
Traceyacey said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 1:23 pm
very good!!!
 
artmantist said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 1:02 pm
awesome poem., Check out my poem too, tnx
 
Wintergrl7 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:31 pm
the beginning was kinda silly, but i loved the last two paragraphs
 
disasterdominant13 replied...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 8:17 am
*um, stanzas? ^^
 
Ella1 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:22 pm

So true! Great job

 

 
ilikeskipping said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 11:15 am
wow this is good. ever thought of turning it into a song?
 
Ender2 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 11:52 am
I completely agree. I could see this as a Taylor Swift song...

But lovely writing, I can relate.
 
Crazy101 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:42 am
this reminds me of someone [:
 
futureDgirl said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:10 am

I also like a guy thathas brown hair.

This fits him perfectly, except the jerk part. He's actually sweet.

 
BrittaneyPeacockThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 7:33 pm
This is really good, keep up the awesome writting
 
LifesIllusion said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 10:04 pm
Really liked this. Super relatable for everyone I think. Keep up the good work! :)
 
CountryCutie said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 6:22 pm

loved this one:) good job!

 

 
Desti_B said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 6:05 pm

i've read this one before and i loved it...lol..but now that i've actually talked to u i like it more lol..

 

 
wilderose121 said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 7:11 pm
do you read minds? i like a guy who is a jerk who has brown hair! this is amazing! pls read my song when it gets up, guys and girls!
 
tweetiebruce said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 5:39 pm
I can totally relate to this! :)
 
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