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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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Wintergrl7 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:31 pm:
the beginning was kinda silly, but i loved the last two paragraphs
 
disasterdominant13 replied...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 8:17 am :
*um, stanzas? ^^
 
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Ella1 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:22 pm:

So true! Great job

 

 
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ilikeskipping said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 11:15 am:
wow this is good. ever thought of turning it into a song?
 
Ender2This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 11:52 am :
I completely agree. I could see this as a Taylor Swift song...

But lovely writing, I can relate.
 
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Crazy101 said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:42 am:
this reminds me of someone [:
 
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futureDgirl said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:10 am:

I also like a guy thathas brown hair.

This fits him perfectly, except the jerk part. He's actually sweet.

 
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BrittaneyPeacockThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 7:33 pm:
This is really good, keep up the awesome writting
 
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LifesIllusion said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 10:04 pm:
Really liked this. Super relatable for everyone I think. Keep up the good work! :)
 
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CountryCutie said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 6:22 pm:

loved this one:) good job!

 

 
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Desti_B said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 6:05 pm:

i've read this one before and i loved it...lol..but now that i've actually talked to u i like it more lol..

 

 
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wilderose121 said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 7:11 pm:
do you read minds? i like a guy who is a jerk who has brown hair! this is amazing! pls read my song when it gets up, guys and girls!
 
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tweetiebruce said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 5:39 pm:
I can totally relate to this! :)
 
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GirlWhoWrote said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 1:28 pm:
Wow! You really wrote this well! Please please please check out my work!!
 
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BridgetND said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 12:32 pm:
could everyone check out my work please? especially my poem "untill =]
 
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Adelle said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 10:39 pm:
I love this because its so relatable! very well writen..and honestly, so incredibly true.
 
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InvisibleHeart said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:30 pm:
 I LOVE this! Very well written and honest. This brought to mind a lot of jerks that I've known. Keep writing, you're doing an excellent job :)
 
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writer101 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:08 pm:
I like it made me laugh a little.Youu tell'em
 
jessicahappy replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 12:17 pm :
i know right it so true
 
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Lunalovesyew said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 5:35 pm:
Omg this is fantastic!! For some reason I picture the trypical crush...taunting you with his ... you know ... jerkiness. Awesome job! I know I'm not being original, but that flowed really well!! The world needs some more simple, strong poems like this. Keep going!
 
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vickilovesyou5 said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 8:12 pm:
That was really good :)
 
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