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Devil's Glare

July 11, 2014
By lostidentity SILVER, Hulmeville, Pennsylvania
lostidentity SILVER, Hulmeville, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
If i cannot use my words, I will use my lyrics.


And we loved
All too much,
So he told
Us to hush.
But oh, no,
How could we?
You planned to bow
On one knee.
Our love was strong;
Stronger than most.
I am sure we even
Scared our host.
We always laughed,
and oftentimes,
We'd come up
With little love rhymes.
We thought we were safe
Talking about forever,
And telling lies
We deemed clever.
But before we rung
The wedding bell,
Our love was brought
To the gates of Hell.
Fiery pits
And molten rock,
We both stood still
As a block.
There he stood,
Angry and red.
He believed none
Of what we said.
We handled this
With no grace.
We could not find
Our home base.
I loved you,
You loved me,
But we could not
Let him see.
But we soon broke,
We had to care,
Unable to escape
The devil's glare.


The author's comments:
My boyfriend and i were deeply in love. When my parents found out about us, they did not hesitate to force us to part.

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on Jul. 21 2014 at 1:46 am
lostidentity SILVER, Hulmeville, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
If i cannot use my words, I will use my lyrics.

aw thanks lovey, that means alot. 

on Jul. 21 2014 at 12:05 am
___averylynn_____ SILVER, Waterford, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Look closely at the present you are constructing. It should look like the future you are dreaming. - Alice Walker.
What you wear is your billboard. So, what are you advertising?

I really liked this, and I understood it.  I wrote a poem about love once, you can read it if you want.  Its called "your love".  Its about a girl.  So yeah.