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Why don’t the blades of grass
Curl away from the flame
How dare the sun
Not hide its head in shame
Why does that tree
Stand so tall
Why don’t the stars
Click off and fall
Your being is twisted
Your body is burned
Life is ending
But the world is preserved

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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mandaloreP said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 3:01 pm:
Great imagry, painted a beautiful picture in my head.
 
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Annabelle294 said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 9:42 am:
I love this, the words are so powerful.
 
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sarahbug16 said...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 12:34 pm:
LOL!! THIS TOTALLY GAVE ME CHILLS! this was really good for such a small amount of words...
 
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AishaDae said...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 5:05 pm:
WOW. This poem simply had so much meaning! Sometimes poems can drag on forever, but yors was just amazing!!
 
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GoldenGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 19, 2010 at 1:43 pm:
Oh my goodness, thank you for this poem!!!! It made my day to read this, no joke. So much poetry written by teenagers is so blatantly melancholy. You can actually write! Way to go!!! :D
 
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bestseller12 said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 10:11 pm:
This was amazingly simple and beautiful. I hope you post more like it.
 
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CestLaVie said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 10:00 pm:
This was beautiful! I loved the simplicity of this piece. Fantastic work :)
 
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I_am_the_only_me said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 10:20 am:
Amazing I haven;t heard a poem like it for a long time. Keep it up!!
 
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KoreyCooper10001 said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 3:39 pm:
Amazing. I love it. I love the way you wrote it. Great poem. (:
 
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StandardToaster said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 7:13 pm:
this is amazing!  I love the topic and just overall it was a really good poem.  check out some of my work?
 
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love2run said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 7:05 pm:
I love your writing style, and great poem- :)
 
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chastity said...
May 25, 2010 at 12:57 pm:
i love it the pic in my head so great
 
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annalisewarnock said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:56 am:
This is a really good poem and it really made an image in my head with all the nature
 
bob 4 o replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 1:29 pm :
i liked it i needed 2 puke tho
 
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onthesidewalkcrying said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:48 pm:
i like it and wonder how this poem came to you where you looking outside. did you here about 2o12 (; .
 
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sausha said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 10:20 am:
hey man this is deep i showed it mi mi older bro and told him thats how i felt and he beat up but it was worth it
 
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delilahsky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 6:20 am:
Great imagery! This is a great poem...
 
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lilsweetcake95 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 11:45 am:
This is very good and this person has a gift. They are decribing the nature and wat it is to them.
 
TheAuthor replied...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 2:34 pm :
Thank you for your comment, but I thought I should let you know that this is not about "what nature means to me"...it's about that old trite phrase, "it's not the end of the world"
 
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Pa S. said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 6:19 pm:
this poem should be preserved. kudos to u.
 
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