The World Is Preserved

This was fantastic! I liked how you personalized the earth, I never thought of the world being this way.

This is BEAUTIFUL!! I love it! Keep writing! :)

Great Job.! I Like When YOuu Said " Your Being Is Twisted Your Body Is Burned." I LIke How You Put It All Together.

The conciseness really adds a level of intrigue to your poem. Great job!

This was great!  Love the line "why don't the stars click off and fall".  Really nice.

Holy cow. It was really good, but so dang simple. I wish I could just flat out say things like that poem does. I think that that's where the charm lies in it, even though its such a negative viewpoint. It's honest and truly describes feelings that most of us have felt: "How can The World  dare to be beautiful when everything in my world is going wrong?"

I really liked this! It was insightful yet simple (: nice work!

You described nature so well. Thank-you.

it's different . which is why i LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5/5 luv it

Very nice. I like it:)

This is a truly beautiful poem.

simple but beautiful,the words are very powerful.

thats wats up!!! omg beautiful

this proves that a piece doesnt bhave to be long to be good . this is fantastic

simply amazing. i adore the first to lines

Great imagry, painted a beautiful picture in my head.

I love this, the words are so powerful.

LOL!! THIS TOTALLY GAVE ME CHILLS! this was really good for such a small amount of words...

WOW. This poem simply had so much meaning! Sometimes poems can drag on forever, but yors was just amazing!!

Oh my goodness, thank you for this poem!!!! It made my day to read this, no joke. So much poetry written by teenagers is so blatantly melancholy. You can actually write! Way to go!!! :D

This was amazingly simple and beautiful. I hope you post more like it.

This was beautiful! I loved the simplicity of this piece. Fantastic work :)

Amazing I haven;t heard a poem like it for a long time. Keep it up!!

Amazing. I love it. I love the way you wrote it. Great poem. (:

this is amazing!  I love the topic and just overall it was a really good poem.  check out some of my work?

I love your writing style, and great poem- :)

i love it the pic in my head so great

This is a really good poem and it really made an image in my head with all the nature

i like it and wonder how this poem came to you where you looking outside. did you here about 2o12 (; .

hey man this is deep i showed it mi mi older bro and told him thats how i felt and he beat up but it was worth it

Great imagery! This is a great poem...

This is very good and this person has a gift. They are decribing the nature and wat it is to them.

this poem should be preserved. kudos to u.

two words: intrigingly amazing

wow...i liked how you included parts of nature in your poem, it helped create an image

This is an a great and unique poem. I love it!

really great poem.one of the best i have read.=D please write more poems like this.
p/s:please read mine and comment it...

This is the best poem I've read all day! Wow, I love it. It's so meaningful and full of thought. That inspired me greatly just reading this poem. Thank you for submitting this poem. It's a real pleasure to finally come across a great poem like this one. I don't see many good ones on here, except this one. This one just really blew my mind. I would really appreciate if you stop by and check out some of my works. Thanks again! Amazing poem! I would have rated it a 6 out of 5 if... (more »)

Wow! That is really good! I really like the questions you ask. And also the emotion! Oooo it's soooo good! Please write more like this! :D

I loved this piece because it reminded me of my own style. You're more talented than me... I still am learning... but I feel like we have like styles. Check out my stuff if you like

you should be SOOO proud! wow is all i can say...i wish i could write that well

Amazing... but still hard. I really enjoyed it.Check out some of mine. You are a good poet. I was touched... and beared