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Dreams

August 8, 2013
By Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool
However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool"
Ralph Waldo Emerson


Her face is defined yet soft
Her smile, bright with incisors long
Her hair, long and flowing
Her eyes, bright and breathtaking

Her voice is A violin, strong yet gentle
Her wit like her brow is sharp yet soft
Her Personality, open yet not forced

Her, in my mind I see oft
Her, a promise not a memory gone
Her with me talking and knowing

She I might meet
in a place
other than
dreams.


The author's comments:
I had a dream of me and a girl talking and promising some day we would find each other

That is the only dream I've ever remembered after waking up,
I hope I see her again...

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on Aug. 31 2013 at 12:29 pm
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool
However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool"
Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thanks if you could check out my other stuff that would be great thanks ( ')>

on Aug. 14 2013 at 4:40 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

this is cool :)

on Aug. 9 2013 at 10:25 am
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool
However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool"
Ralph Waldo Emerson

Please give me some written feedback on this and some of my other poems, I'm trying to decide wich to enter into a contest later this year  


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