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Clouded vision of love

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Clouds still whispering in the sky,
Our ever moving blanket as we lay below,
Those three special words flutter from your lips,
Lacking the same conviction as only a few days ago,

My mind filled with everything before,
All those times we refused to end this,
We fought through god knows how many problems,
Forgotten how many times this has been fixed,

"I'm not so sure," my silent cry sounds,
As the clouds close in around us,
The circling fog steals you away from me,
You go along without a fuss,

The feelings towards you still strong in my heart,
Though I know now that we must part.



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freepersonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 1 at 10:07 am:
This is so cool...and so right because i feel like that all the tijme
 
Mimifaith replied...
today at 12:04 pm :
I'm glad you feel you can relate to it, though it isn't a nice feeling. I hope you feel better soon, nothing hurts more than losing someone you love:)
 
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