Clouded vision of love

April 26, 2013
By Mimifaith BRONZE, Penzance, Other
Mimifaith BRONZE, Penzance, Other
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Clouds still whispering in the sky,
Our ever moving blanket as we lay below,
Those three special words flutter from your lips,
Lacking the same conviction as only a few days ago,

My mind filled with everything before,
All those times we refused to end this,
We fought through god knows how many problems,
Forgotten how many times this has been fixed,

"I'm not so sure," my silent cry sounds,
As the clouds close in around us,
The circling fog steals you away from me,
You go along without a fuss,

The feelings towards you still strong in my heart,
Though I know now that we must part.

The author's comments:
We al fall in and out of love, we all feel betrayed by the clouded heart of the hurt.

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on Jun. 19 2013 at 12:04 pm
Mimifaith BRONZE, Penzance, Other
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I'm glad you feel you can relate to it, though it isn't a nice feeling. I hope you feel better soon, nothing hurts more than losing someone you love:)

on May. 1 2013 at 10:07 am
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

This is so cool...and so right because i feel like that all the tijme


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