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Judgement for judges

the last of us will know
how the world came to be
a place without hope
without sympathy.

because torture is fun
as the common trend claims.
and so is gasolene!
let’s go up in flames

what most don’t realize
is how they could change
work for the better
but it’s a crime to be strange.

judgement is here
but it’s not judgement day.
because people judge
to them it’s okay,

which leads me to this:
relativism is at its best
so murdering is good
depending on the person who pulled the trigger.




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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 5, 2013 at 8:48 am:
I love this, and I love the ending! I think it challenges what we value, and I like the part you snuck in about relativism, I agree so much on your viewpoint!
 
BlueCannons3030This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 4:36 pm :
Thank you! You seem like a pretty awesome person if you agree with all of my crazy beliefs XD
 
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randumfaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 24, 2013 at 2:51 pm:
thanks! I really tried to make it as true as possible without having a normal, boring tone.
 
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jonoboy said...
May 7, 2013 at 11:37 pm:
This is an amazing poem and it's so true. Nice job. I love it.
 
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