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A path into the forest,
Though unknown where it leads,
I feel this sense of longing,
I feel this sort of need.

A path into the forest,
Mysteriously dark,
Without a sound or rustle,
No singing of a lark.

A path into the forest,
Without a trace of life,
Trees looming ominously,
Silent, still: no strife.

A path into the forest,
Shivers run through my bones,
A moment's hesitation,
Then I'm lost in the unknown.



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Corinne P. said...
today at 4:32 pm:
Ya the forestO.O I feel it it's so creepy
 
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swat17 said...
Apr. 25, 2013 at 7:23 am:
Awesome job! The only thing I recommend is making the first and third lines of the first stanza rhyme to match the rhyme scheme of the rest of the poem. Keep up the good work!
 
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LiraDaeris said...
Apr. 21, 2013 at 7:29 pm:
Oooo cool air to this poem! Ominous and quiet... *checks the coast for SlenderMan*
 
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