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Dreamer

Puffy pink clouds go fluttering by,
blowing a breeze through the sky.
The castle stands high above all.
With a little girl and her little doll.
The wind sweeps her off her feet.
The clouds creating her very own seat.
"I'm the first," the girl thought out loud.
"To be swept away by a puffy pink cloud"
The girl lay back and close her eyes,
letting the cloud become her disguise



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RolledthestoneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 1:05 pm:
Poetic...:) But seriously, very good. Loved the imagery and the creativity. The ending was perfect.
 
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