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September 2, 2008
By yourlonelylover PLATINUM, Harrington Park, New Jersey
yourlonelylover PLATINUM, Harrington Park, New Jersey
26 articles 1 photo 3 comments

They say after heartbreak, a haircut
A clean slate for every mistake
But now I’ve no hair left for cutting
And even less heart left to break



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on Jun. 9 2016 at 1:25 pm
interestingchoiceofwords, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Tie a noose around your mind, loose enough to be fine..." Twenty One Pilots, Holding On To You

Very relatable. After a bad break up of mine, I literally cut nearly all my hair off. Chilling word choice, you have a lot of talent

williscodi said...
on Nov. 5 2015 at 1:22 pm
williscodi, Brusly, Louisiana
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People now a days don't take relationships serious. They end up hurting people because a relationship isn't important to them. It’s sickening to see people being used. When he says, “And even less heart left to break.” His heart was broken before and doesn't get better as he goes.

on Mar. 27 2012 at 3:30 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Really cool~ Short and direct with so much meaning. 

on Feb. 8 2012 at 5:40 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

Same here. Its an amazing poem, I love it. But I'm not really sure what its saying. I thought maybe it was something about cancer because "no hair left" but than maybe just about love because of the last line.

Tremendous said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 10:28 pm
so short, but perfectly descriptive. cuts right to the core. amazing.

eliana924 GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 9:30 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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Wow, this is so chilling. It's one of the best short poems I've ever read. My favorite line is, "But now I've no hair left for cutting."

DebSham SILVER said...
on Nov. 4 2011 at 5:38 pm
DebSham SILVER, Marlton, New Jersey
8 articles 11 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You are the object of your own action"- thought of this one on my own.
"Just Keep Moving Forward"- Meet the Robbinsons, my all-time favorite movie

Wow! Short but extremely true and vey deep! I love it:)

irishlass317 said...
on Oct. 8 2011 at 11:39 pm
irishlass317, Jefferson City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"I asked Jesus 'How much do you love me?' He answered 'This much.' And He streched out His arms and died."

this is very true!! I really like it :-)

panda97 said...
on Sep. 12 2011 at 10:15 am
its so true its like sayin gthe more sins u make the less forgives u get or somthing i love this poem its so true

on Aug. 3 2011 at 2:31 pm
singinginthegardn GOLD, Cowell, Massachusetts
16 articles 2 photos 158 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anaïs Nin

Chills!!! Extremely good writing..keep it up <3!

 


on Jun. 20 2011 at 11:01 am
ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes PLATINUM, Raymore, Missouri
23 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over,
Smile because it happened."


-Dr. Suess

This is really good(:

If you have time could you check some of my poems out and comment.?


on May. 29 2011 at 11:08 am
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

Pahaha . i mean 4 lines...(:

on May. 29 2011 at 11:07 am
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

Beautiful.

I love how you can express that type of feeling in 4 stanza's . Two thumbs up!


shelb said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 12:08 pm
yeah a little more emotion

Shelb said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 12:06 pm
this is sooo great omg!!! But i dont get it.. kind of.

on Apr. 5 2011 at 5:50 pm
hijkmichelle SILVER, Zanesville, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
i love you i hate you

okay im glad to have helped

Alasia said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 2:11 pm
Alasia, Bradenton, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't follow a path, make your own, and leave a trail.

i think it's great. sweet,short,straight to the point. bravo!!!

on Mar. 30 2011 at 9:53 pm
buggzbunnie BRONZE, Middle River, Maryland
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this is good id like to see a longer piece of yours you have potiential . maybe a little more emotion would make it alot better

on Mar. 24 2011 at 12:02 pm
ventureroftheunknown BRONZE, Adell, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
you don't have to keep me falling, but it'd sure be cool if you did.

I love this poem, it shows real emotion. =)

on Mar. 6 2011 at 1:26 pm
RomeofreeJuliet BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plate

Short and sweet!


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