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The Wild Bloom

March 14, 2013
By ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 168 comments

The wild bloom is enchanting,
On a hillside in late spring,
In a forest in summer;
A heavenly scent is what it'll bring.

The wild bloom is beautiful,
Like a rainbow on the grass;
Like sunset gold upon the ground,
Purer silver than the bass.

The wild bloom is livening,
Joy to those who look at it;
Peace to those who study it;
Hope to those who think of it.



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on Apr. 7 2013 at 8:43 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 168 comments
Thnx so much for the positive comments! You have no idea how much it incourages and inspires me! =)

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 7:54 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

Beautifully written! :) It's usually so hard for me to write about flowers, you did such a great job with this! Keep it up :)

on Apr. 3 2013 at 9:22 pm
laurengerhard SILVER, South Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"I am gone quite mad with the knowledge of accepting the overwhelming number of things I can never know, places I can never go, and people I can never be." -Sylvia Plath

This is beautiful! Good job. I like how you used a unique rhyme pattern.


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