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Carry Me Home MAG

August 14, 2008
By Anonymous

He left us instructions,
From Genesis to Revelations.
The answers to life,
Written in between the pages.
We could’ve had it all
With a simple cover to cover.
Too scared to have a voice,
So we listened to each other.
Uneasy minds,
Starting war among the nations.
We could’ve had peace,
But we didn’t have the patience.

So I sit and I wonder
About the paths we could’ve taken.
Every last word,
To where we left you forsaken.

That’s why I’m down on my knees
With my hands to the skies.
Pleading for forgiveness
For the way we live our lives.

You know that we try,
And we could always try harder.
But the way this world turned out,
Most wouldn’t even bother.
And I’m sorry, Father,
For not seeing the light.
But all your sons and your daughters
Are being taught the wrong fight.
Struggling for life,
And not what life has to give.
Mud-covered soles;
We’ve been pacing through sin.
And I know in the end,
It doesn’t matter where we’ve been,
As long as we follow you home.
Please explain this to my friends.



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on May. 20 2010 at 11:10 am
Sweet_Inspiration GOLD, Corry, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life for a better tomorrow." -Author Unknown

This was an excruciating poem it gave me some things to look forward to. Excellent Job!

on May. 7 2010 at 5:51 pm
songofheaven BRONZE, East Amherst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
I have found power in the mysteries of thought. -Euripides

Well, I'm pretty sure god inspired it.

armybrat11 said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:23 pm
That was a great poem!

on Apr. 15 2010 at 9:18 am
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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WOW...that is so beautiful. U have a way with words. its so moving...what inspired this poem?

on Apr. 15 2010 at 6:08 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

beautiful.

on Apr. 12 2010 at 2:33 pm
Demon_of_Truth, Warrenton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm not a geek, I prefer the term 'intellectual bad-a**"

I loved the religious tone to this, in past experience it's been hard to write about faith becuase you get so much chritism for it. But i don't really see how anyone will be able to say anything bad about this.

bmmseh said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:45 am
I loved it!!!!! You keep on writing because that was totally amazing!!!!

on Feb. 8 2010 at 8:27 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

this is so beatiful and i love it!!! check out my work plz?

on Oct. 12 2009 at 10:23 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

wow that was amazing