Margo

November 15, 2012
By sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette


Margo's eyes glowed in the dark.
It was nighttime at the park.

Margo's brain was a bit confused.
It made the man slightly amused.

Margo felt an eerie sensation.
the man felt to much temptation.

Margo wasn't quite prepared,
but the man hadn't really cared.

A body found underneath a tree:
My friend, that could've been you or me.

Margo's funeral was on a Sunday.
The man cried on the very next Monday.

Guilt took over the murderer's life,
so left the earth through a knife.


The author's comments:
A story about a girl who was murdered and the killer killed himself because of the guilt he felt.

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on Nov. 28 2012 at 10:44 am
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette

thanks so much!  If you can get two  more people to comment on my poem with positive ideas, I will continue this poem and let you know when it is done. ill check out ur work. thanks an million!!! :)

on Nov. 27 2012 at 6:00 pm
kate_anne PLATINUM, Cedartown, Georgia
41 articles 7 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win.
-Stephen King

This is awesome. Why didn't you write more???




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