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Don’t Be Afraid, Be Brave!

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I don’t have wings to fly,
And I’m always scared to try,
But dreams of mine is high,
To change the world and touch the sky.
But how? I can’t ever be like Superman,
I can’t do the things I think I can,
Coz’ many things get me so weak,
Lots of obstacle makes me freak.

It seems that I’m just nothing,
To this world I only know is crying.
Suddenly I heard God asking,
“Why a man like you is afraid of trying?”
I later realize that I have to struggle,
In this path of life, I need to travel.
It’s not awful to try for something,
Coz’ God made us to be amazing.



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ValleryClaire said...
Nov. 14, 2012 at 6:19 am:
Oh :D Thank You for appreciating my poem . Thanks for your replies xD Please check my other works. Some of them are much better than this :D
 
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ValleryClaire said...
Nov. 14, 2012 at 6:18 am:
Oh :D Thank You for appreciating my poem . Thanks for your replies xD Please check my other works. Some of themmm are much better than this :D
 
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ChobaniLuvinPenguinThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 13, 2012 at 9:00 am:
Great job! Your message is very clear, especially in the last stanza. You should just be careful to stick to the rhyme scheme, because your rhyming pattern in the second stanza is different from that of the first stanza. You also have some minor grammar mistakes, but I can't blame you since you're from the Philippines. Good job! Keep writing!!!
 
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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 12, 2012 at 3:00 pm:
This is great! Very inspiring!! Loved it! Mind checking out my work?:) It would mean a lot.
 
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ValleryClaire said...
Nov. 12, 2012 at 8:51 am:
Thank you again :D
 
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remember16 said...
Nov. 12, 2012 at 7:53 am:
I really like this.  your a good writer you should cheak out some of my poetry(: again good job!
 
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