Burning Flesh

Evil men shouting
A world filled with sin
People uncaring of the human life
Looking at my people as a pack of animals
Instead as individuals
That's why they can kill my kind
I hear screaming children
To end it all is the only thing I can do
To burn is the only way
To show them the error in there ways
To show them what war does to people
This is my last resort
To set a fire to myself
And I'm confidant that this will end the suffering
You might think me to be a hero
But I just have a tolerance of zero





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chamomile This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 7:42 pm
This is great work! Favorite lines : "You may think me to be a hero, But I just have a tolerance of zero" Suggestions: taking the "and" out of "i'm confident that this will end the suffering" (also, confident was misspelled" as well as "to show them the error in their ways" you misspelled "their" mostly typos and a grammer suggestion. The message was very powerful, keep posting!
 
RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 11:57 pm
This work has so much passion and emotion in it, it's amazing :) I'd love to read more of your work sometime
 
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