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An open window
That you promise to leave open
And bear with heavy rain
That contains crying pain
Ignore the lost insects that crawl inside
And winters that blows in shivering nights

The open window
That also shares sunlight and smiles
Sunrises of memories and love
With a view like no other

Promise me you’ll never pull the curtains
And that you’ll never shut me out




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TheHangingGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2012 at 1:26 pm:
I Agree with the crying part- it was beautiful how you wrote it.
 
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LongLazyDays55 said...
Jul. 28, 2012 at 12:43 pm:
I really like this piece! My favourite part: And bear with heavy rain That contains crying pain. Like the imagery in this as well! :D
 
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nakubaraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2012 at 2:25 pm:
I really like this. Its abstract, good job!
 
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