My Dreams

March 15, 2012
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I open my eyes
In a valley of smoke
It blows in my face
But I do not choke.
What is this world
Where pain is not felt?
Where happiness expands
And worries melt?
Why can’t I find it
When I am awake?
Why must I sleep
Why must I wait?
But this place is not how it seems,
What is this place, I call my Dreams?

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DanielM. said...
Apr. 29, 2012 at 9:55 am
I really liked the message. Great job.
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 6:28 pm
I commented ;) haha I actually really, really love this- I can totally relate! <3 
DaLemon replied...
Apr. 7, 2012 at 7:52 pm
This is amazing!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D  I loved it because I feel like anyone and everyone can relate to it, and its just... so... AWESOME!! :D :D :D :D :D <3333
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