Smokey eyes

February 17, 2012
By albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov


The Smoke rises
and looks upon me.
The air is too humid
too hard to breath

Down to Earth
but yet so free.
Goes with the wind
but stays close to me.

You are always there
an echo to my cries.
Though you always make me smile
With your gray smokey eyes

The author's comments:
i wrote this poem while in my health class. We were suppose to be working on a project, but i think this poem is better.

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on Jul. 21 2012 at 9:23 pm
OceanWaters SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
Be different, stand out, and work your butt off.
Reba McEntire

I think it is a great poem but you neeed to define more who it is about because i cant decide weather it is about a girlfriend, girl you like, or a best friend. also try writing longer poems it helps you be more descreptive. Also focus in health class you do learn stuff in health.

on Jul. 12 2012 at 3:36 pm
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

THIS IS AWESOME! Keep it up! School comes first though! :)

on Jul. 10 2012 at 5:49 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 187 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

thank you, i will. thanks for commenting!

SilentChaos said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 5:23 pm
This is really awesome. You should keep writing :)


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