The Rollercoaster

February 3, 2012
By RAYJJONES SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
RAYJJONES SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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The car slowly creeps up the track, clack! CLACK!
Anticipation builds as you near the top
Your stomach twists and does backflips inside
You scream in fear and want the ride to stop

Anticipation builds as you reach the top
As you plummet down your body seems to float
You scream in fear and want the ride to stop
The ride still has a while long to go

As you plummet down your body seems to float
Around the track you fly, you hold on for dar life
The ride still has a while long to go
Weightless you scream, "I'm going to die, Goodbye!"

Around the track you fly, you hold on for dear life
The end is near but OH! the loopty loop
Weightless you scream, "I'm going to die! Goodbye!"
Down you soar the end is in your sight

The end is near but OH! another loopty loop
your stomach flips and does backflips inside
Down you soar the end is in your sight
The car clowly creeps to the end, clack! CLACK!


The author's comments:
This is a Pantoum I wrote about a rollercoaster.

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