A Brother's Love

Protective, selfless & caring
Gifted, intelligent & loving
This is a brother's love
It's priceless
And there is never a moment of dullness
You always made me smile & grin
You were definitely more than just my twin
I knew you well and you knew me
I really hope that you can see
That you're always on my mind & in my heart
And even though we are apart
I know you'll be watching, guiding & leading
Because a brother's love is never fleeting





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AgentOrange789 said...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 1:06 am
Very nice! Reminds me of people who I owe a visit. 
 
dreamshaker This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 5:38 pm

this was so sweet.

very powerful - i really enjoyed it.

 
drishm said...
Feb. 28, 2012 at 12:08 pm
I like it!!! :D
 
KateLA said...
Feb. 26, 2012 at 2:00 am
I love this-I did a poem for my brother too! It's nice to be able to dedicate something to them, isn't it? :-)
 
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 4:23 am
In the first and second lines, I could say that your adjectives are not that strong. And they don't seem to treat the third line well enough. If you know what I mean... Anyway, ont he sixth line, smile and grin is kind of redundant. Some of your words are kind of clique too. Anyway, I understand what you're trying to say and I hope you move on with the passing away of your brother. :) And, hey! I'm not ttrying to be mean with the criticism, by the way. Just something to let you know your strengh... (more »)
 
Let-it-breathe said...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 1:16 pm
Sorry about your loss. Great poem though
 
AlpsPuppy said...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 6:06 pm
All I can say is amazing and that is the truest thing in the world.
 
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