A Wonderful Feeling

January 23, 2012
By PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein


Gold and diamonds shine inside,

Rainbows dance in circles.

The brightest colors all around,

Blue, green, pink and purple.



Fireworks explode somewhere,

Butterflies flutter deep down.

Hearts surround you head to toe,

Your hear every little sound.



Suddenly nothing matters to you,

And everything’s a blur.

But everything matters even more,

Your heart beats a steady whir.



Floating away on soft fluffy clouds,

You swear you’re going insane.

And when all of this is dumped on you,

I swear you’ll feel the pain.



Because then comes heartbreak, cold as ice,

When you will crash and burn.

Everyone told you but you didn’t listen-

Well now, my dear, it’s your turn.



That experience you’ll never forget,

The angels sang from above.

It was wonderfully painful all at once,

That feeling of falling in love.


The author's comments:
I hope that readers will think back to their own experiences, and how love really is wonderful but also painful. This is exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this.

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on Mar. 18 2012 at 10:05 am
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein

thanks! this is one of my favorites that I wrote

illusions GOLD said...
on Feb. 29 2012 at 10:30 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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beautiful. great job!!!!




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