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The day I fully met her
She had a smile that was so mighty
I got so distracted by her eyes
I thought she was Aphrodite

Her laugh,her smile
was filled with so much lush
Her sweet and kind soul
I knew I had a crush

Her hardworking sportsmanship
with her long beautiful hair
Including her great intelligence
A chance to show that I care

Her doubts about herself
Shouldn't be said
This would make me sad
She has a whole life, a step ahead

The wind blowing in her face
Which reminds me of a peaceful dove
The way she makes my day
She must have been sent from above

The nobility she has to help others
with a kind and strong heart
makes me want to smile
I hope...we are never apart





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Wingman24 said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 2:17 am
Hope. She starts to recognize u more
 
Wingman24 said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 2:14 am
But it's romantic and she still likes it.I give u props for this poem.good job
 
Wingman24 said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 1:42 am
Dude I actually know the girl and she has read it and she thinks it's a little to obsessed about her
 
nevershoutnever<3 replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 6:35 pm
this is really sweet and im sure she will feel very special! keep writing you're a good poet
 
EternallyMe03 said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 3:20 pm
This piece is sweet and beautiful- it made me smile.
 
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