What If...

January 2, 2012
By AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
12 articles 7 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven


What if you and I switched places?
What if I had you crying?
And each day I said I love you
Without it ever having meaning

What if I put someone else first?
And there was other man in my life
And it wouldn’t mean a thing
Even if I was your wife

What if I lied to you?
Over and over again
I want to know
If you would love me then

What if this was who I was
And you were just the innocent one
How would it make you feel?
When I told you we’re done

What if my love for you wasn’t real?
But you continued loving me
Please tell me how I should feel
Because I can’t live like this anymore

The author's comments:
I know its not perfect but these are just some feelings I've had lately. Does anyone else feel the same way sometimes?

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RoseJ BRONZE said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 5:13 pm
RoseJ BRONZE, Texas, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

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Love is forever, Bite Me, Make me, Pshhhhh

Very VERY nice, I LOVED IT! I sure do know how THAT feels lol great job

on May. 22 2012 at 5:39 pm
soccergirl101 BRONZE, Carrollton, Virginia
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I realy liked this one

on Apr. 4 2012 at 8:19 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

:o ah-MAZ-ung

on Apr. 4 2012 at 12:25 pm
LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The course of true love never did love smooth." William Shakespeare

I really like you style, not only the way you write but your pictures too, they're all really good.

on Feb. 29 2012 at 10:53 pm
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
12 articles 7 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven

Thank you all for reading :)

on Feb. 28 2012 at 10:30 am
AimeeRichae SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If life hands me lemons, you better believe I'll be making the best dang lemonade ever!"

I really like your..... style i guess you could call it. I like the way it all flows and feels personal. Check some of mine out. Keep Writing!

on Feb. 23 2012 at 10:34 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

I love the way you start ach stanza with what if and then goes into depth. the last stanza just ends it perfectly

on Jan. 18 2012 at 6:36 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I like it, but I think you can do more. Don't get me wrong, I just feel you can expand a bit. For me, it was over too fast. Really, I think that this piece could be part of a song.


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