Leading Me on...

November 20, 2011
I had a chance, and then I blew it.
You led me on and never knew it
And now its time to say goodbye,
I take a breathe, a deep big sigh.
When you start to like her,
my whole world becomes a blur.
Everything you say to me,
will become bad things for her to see.
I can't stand the hurt,
of seeing you two flirt.
And when you're holding her hand,
it is a sight i cannot stand.
I thought I had you all for me,
but now that thought is history.

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Writerforlife7423 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:43 pm
Totally know how you feel! Just some tips....you might want to separate them into stanzas so we, as readers, can pause and really feel the rhyme. Also, maybe read lines 2 at a time again and see if you can make them flow a little more. The last two lines went perfectly together--good writing and great ending! Would you mind checking some of my work out? :) Thanks!
LivingMYLife said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:54 am

i almost feel bad liking this poem because it is so sad


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