Dead Or Alive?

October 31, 2011
By ethan_bane_hope GOLD, Willis, Texas
ethan_bane_hope GOLD, Willis, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing to fear except fear itself


Dead or alive

Am I dead or am I alive?

I don’t know and it’s no surprise.

Death brings peace life brings pain.

The void before and after is something in between.

I feel nothing but I think I should,

I should be screaming in pain but instead I am just standing.

Standing in the middle of this un-earthly void,

feeling nothing not even the rain.

The rain is pouring down, down on me.

But I hear, see, and feel nothing and this is how it has to be.

Because in this void nothing exists.

No hope and no pain so it’s all amiss


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-Ash- SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 12:40 am
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
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She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you’ve got nothing to show for your life?

really liked this! very interesting, keep writing! :)

on Nov. 18 2011 at 7:07 pm
ethan_bane_hope GOLD, Willis, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 16 comments

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there is nothing to fear except fear itself

ya sure on the way to check it out. thanks for the reply! i just wish that it didnt take so long to publish

FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 4:49 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
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forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

this is really good. keep writing i can tell this is going to be really popular on teenink when people see it. pleasse can u check out some of my work? thanks x


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