Dead Or Alive?

October 31, 2011
Dead or alive

Am I dead or am I alive?

I don’t know and it’s no surprise.

Death brings peace life brings pain.

The void before and after is something in between.

I feel nothing but I think I should,

I should be screaming in pain but instead I am just standing.

Standing in the middle of this un-earthly void,

feeling nothing not even the rain.

The rain is pouring down, down on me.

But I hear, see, and feel nothing and this is how it has to be.

Because in this void nothing exists.

No hope and no pain so it’s all amiss

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-Ash- said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 12:40 am
really liked this! very interesting, keep writing! :)
FULLSTOP said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 4:49 am
this is really good. keep writing i can tell this is going to be really popular on teenink when people see it. pleasse can u check out some of my work? thanks x
ethan_bane_hope replied...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 7:07 pm
ya sure on the way to check it out. thanks for the reply! i just wish that it didnt take so long to publish
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