Left-Over Scares

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Pain filled the open breeze
Bringing my body down
Bruises covering flesh with bare
Tears touching the ground

Blood filled his fresh hands
Tearing me apart
Stabbing me from the inside out
Hurting me from the start

Once have loved his very soul
But every word turned sour
His anger is pure and full
Built with strength and power

There is no more left of him
No more that I shall keep
All he brought to me was pain
Lying there in a heap

The scares show bright, fierce, and red
Traces left over that he done wrong
No more shall he hurt me
Cause his living days are gone





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TraceWakingTheFallen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 5:47 pm
If there's one thing I can say about this ballad, it's that it's very well done. The eerie vibe of the whole piece is played very well, and the overall feel seems to fit the words. Great job :D
 
JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 4:34 pm
O.o this is kind of eerie. And depressing. I can feel all the pain....very eerie, 4/5. If you dont mind my asking, what was this about? Is it something that happened to you? Sorry, curiousity talking there. But still....
 
ErinMM replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 6:35 pm
no no it didnt happen to me. i dont just something i wrote in study about pain, and a girl that was hurt by a guy that keep treating her wrong that she just coulndt get away from him
 
amandavanzant said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 2:38 pm
this is really good. i like ur work... a lil depressing tho
 
ErinMM replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 5:16 pm
thanks for the comment, it means alot to mean. and i know its depressing. but i read all your stuff and thought it was great
 
country-girl said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 5:58 pm
i think that was good but being honest could put a little happiness in it but other thatn that i loved it!!!! :) keep up the good job girl.
 
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