Left-Over Scares

October 4, 2011
By JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back


Pain filled the open breeze
Bringing my body down
Bruises covering flesh with bare
Tears touching the ground

Blood filled his fresh hands
Tearing me apart
Stabbing me from the inside out
Hurting me from the start

Once have loved his very soul
But every word turned sour
His anger is pure and full
Built with strength and power

There is no more left of him
No more that I shall keep
All he brought to me was pain
Lying there in a heap

The scares show bright, fierce, and red
Traces left over that he done wrong
No more shall he hurt me
Cause his living days are gone



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on Oct. 14 2012 at 5:47 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

If there's one thing I can say about this ballad, it's that it's very well done. The eerie vibe of the whole piece is played very well, and the overall feel seems to fit the words. Great job :D

on Jan. 7 2012 at 6:35 pm
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back

no no it didnt happen to me. i dont just something i wrote in study about pain, and a girl that was hurt by a guy that keep treating her wrong that she just coulndt get away from him

on Jan. 5 2012 at 4:34 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

O.o this is kind of eerie. And depressing. I can feel all the pain....very eerie, 4/5. If you dont mind my asking, what was this about? Is it something that happened to you? Sorry, curiousity talking there. But still....

on Jan. 4 2012 at 5:16 pm
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back

thanks for the comment, it means alot to mean. and i know its depressing. but i read all your stuff and thought it was great

on Jan. 1 2012 at 2:38 pm
amandavanzant BRONZE, Yorktown, Virginia
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my boyfriend is Christopher Vitt and i love him with all of my heart

this is really good. i like ur work... a lil depressing tho

on Nov. 2 2011 at 5:58 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

i think that was good but being honest could put a little happiness in it but other thatn that i loved it!!!! :) keep up the good job girl.




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