Rain in the West

August 23, 2011
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Rain hear my cry
Rain grace my land
Rain reach my ears
Rain touch my hand

Rain loose your wrath
Rain open your door
Rain drench my back
Rain let it pour

Rain cease this ache
Rain quench my thirst
Rain end this sorrow
Rain stop this curse

Rain I hear you
Rain come close
Rain overhead
Rain like a ghost

Rain in the evening
Rain in my sight
Rain in the morning
Rain in the night

Rain never stopping
Rain always pounding
Rain beating hard
Rain so surrounding

Rain on the fields
Rain on the steer
Rain at my doorstep
Rain finally here

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ErinMM said...
Oct. 4, 2011 at 9:47 pm
you are a great writer and your words just flow rite together. Keep up the work, you have alot of great talent!
dia.dreamer said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 9:25 am
I love how the rhythm is so perfect that it sort of sounds like the rhythmic patter of rain, though you might not have realized it. :) awesome job! I absolutely love nature too, and every one of my poems are based on nature. keep writing!
Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 9:48 pm
This is amazing! I love the repitition and the rhythm to this poem. Well done! :)
Saphirra said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 10:13 am
You are a very talented writer! I read your other work too, and all of them are amazing!  Keep up the amazing work! :D
ChocoMint replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 3:14 pm
Thanks a lot.  I love to write and it's a wonderful feeling to know other people like your hard work.  <><  =+)
Skylight said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 10:04 am
Wow, this is amazing! I really like how well it flowed, and I can feel the emotion in it! Never stop writing, ChocoMint. :)
ChocoMint replied...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 7:40 pm
Thank you so much.  =+)
Steph0804 replied...
Sept. 5, 2011 at 7:15 am
This flowed really well! You should keep writing poetry!
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