I Don't Know What's Wrong With Me

August 2, 2011
By Brandon Dinosaur BRONZE, Jersey City, New Jersey
Brandon Dinosaur BRONZE, Jersey City, New Jersey
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Hold me down and scream at me 
Tell me I suck and make me bleed 
Caress my wounds and sing to me 
That this life is a tragedy 

Tie my arms to your pedestal 
Slice my head and damn my soul 
Boil my legs in a bowl 
And throw my bones down a hole 

Destroy every memory
Kill my heart and kill my seed 
My loss is the worlds gain 
So put everyone else out of pain 

Make an effort and burn my face 
And do it with style and grace 
Because I want to go out with a bang 
So homicidal is my plan 

So I leave my gun my knife and note 
On second thought burn the note
Because no one would want to remember me 
As this life is a tragedy 


The author's comments:
I like writing different personalities especially crazy insane ones and that's what I did at 3 am in the morning.

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on Sep. 24 2011 at 9:52 am
Brandon Dinosaur BRONZE, Jersey City, New Jersey
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ur poem was pretty cool, nd these arent my feelings... read the author's comments lol

dancestar GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 3:23 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

tht was very original and fun to read...it was eerie but very creative and captivating...gud job! i hope these feelings are not true because you are worth a lot! plz keep writing! and check out my work like "Girl Next Door" i think you'll like it...thanks!


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