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Remember me...
From fourteen short years ago?
You said you would always be there,
But I guess that wasn't so.

From time to time I wonder,
If I look or act like you,
I hope I don't smile like you smiled,
Because your smile was untrue.

Did it hurt you when you left me,
Or did you just not care?
Did you ever think to call me,
No...and that's not fair.

Did you ever think how it is for me,
To never have had a dad?
Do you care about how I feel,
That it makes me really sad.

Remember me...
From fourteen years ago?
Hey, I'm your daughter,
The one you'll never know.





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Panirap said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 7:28 pm

Hey,

Not bad! I like this one the best :)

Vey nice job with the sentence structure, and the way the feelings got conveyed.

keep writing :)

see if you can check my stuff out! i appreciate it!

Thanks!

 
BriBear143 replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 10:55 pm
Thanks:) I'll totallyy check out your stuff!
 
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