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My Friend

When I have some problem
He is the one to listen to me,
Since he always advises me,
it helps me vent.

When I think about the failure
He shines on me to give me hope,
And he consoles me saying,'in my steps
I must have confidence'.

He shares his sorrow and
good things with me
That happen to him in his house,
And in the school.

He makes me look at my lacks
When I commit a mistake,
It never gives me the back
When I ask for a favor him.

Though the time separates us,
The memories console us.
And if the distance is far
that is not important what happens.

Since we are best friends,
And our friendship is strong
like the gentle dew of dawn
It is what keeps us close.

He is my sincere friend
And my more faithful companion,
He who guards my secrets
And it can understand me.

He who says to me "he relies on me"
He is my best friend.



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JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 15, 2012 at 6:00 pm:
Very sweet poem =) 4/5
 
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monaa said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 12:34 pm:
NYC 1 YAR!!!!!!!!
 
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praveenbryonadamrocksThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 10:24 am:
thanks....
 
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zone7494 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 4:54 pm:
this is an awesome poem maybe you can check out some of my poems
 
praveenbryonadamrocksThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 7:43 am :
Thanks dude....i red your poems and i like your poem'MORE THAN WHAT YOU SEE'......IT'S SO NICE.....
 
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Lonexwolf said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 11:24 am:
I can tell this came from your heart and you probably had a very strong and focused friendship. Truthfully a nice and excellent way to explain it. ^_^
 
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