“Two lovers destruction”

July 23, 2011
Two lovers sitting under glorious moonlight beams.
Cuddling with each other in there dreams.

The love is so strong.
They knew that they belong.

The days go by without anything going wrong.
The times are clear when they came along.

Out of the blue a spy comes by.
Spreading the word of the lives.

The two lovers are safe from the flies.
As they are hidden from their lies.

Their parents do not know about this secret affair.
The parents intervene like a hungry bear.

The two lovers are destroyed into something.
But are left with nothing.

They really knew this was arriving.
Their love is drowning.

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praveenbryonadamrocks said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 8:06 am
well ok.......may be we can share our ideas....i will post my facebook name here and will delete it later my facebook name is ADAM CRAZZY SPIRALS.....my fb profile picture is same as the picture of teen ink
Lonexwolf replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 12:23 pm
Alright got it man.
praveenbryonadamrocks said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 8:29 pm
bt one exception:Parents are more educative then us and i think they will do only good to their children even i think mummy will do good to his child(except some peoples)
praveenbryonadamrocks said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 8:27 pm
It was nice,bt i think it's not so good like other 2 ballads you wrote(the cry of lonely wolf and lonely dream).........bt thi ballad has also some powerful ideas.....good job(:if i have to say really i become your fan after i read that poem'the cry of lonely wolf'..........i will comment all ur works....also help mw by telling me how can u write well like this....have a nice day
Lonexwolf replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 11:45 pm
Thank you so much man, Its better for me to explain if this had messaging or something >.< I like your work. :) I suggest a few edits and tweaks here and there, and a rhyme here and there but its better if there was a way for me to talk to you easier >.<
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