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“Lonely Dreams”

I dream of the bride of my dreams….
Lying under my midnight scenes….

Her voice soft like a star….
Her face pale like a clear jar….

Her heart brighter then the sky….
Her eyes lighter then my hopeless lies...

Her scent sweet like cream….
Her body making me steam….

I run for the one I crave…..
I feel like a slave under the midnight grave….

She’s the reasons I exist….
Everything is just a bliss…

I awake from my slumber…..
To be hung over.….

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praveenbryonadamrocks said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 8:23 pm
Hey dude,i wanna tell u thing........u r terrific......this ballad is also so wonderful like that ballad'the cry of lonely wolf'....but i think this ballad will be even more wonderful if it has few more extra lines....
LonexwolfThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 11:42 pm

Yeah it should have been more but this was about a dream though. Sooo I was trying to write what I remember I will think of more to add though :)


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