“The Power Of Love”

July 14, 2011
By EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous


She sees the guy of her dreams, walking by her threw the day.
She knows that love is a powerful theme, as he stands feeling like a Frey.

The time arrives for the question.
As she understands everything is in session.

He answers with the coldest way.
As he was her prey.

She in disbelief ends her self in that exact broken night.
Leaving with out a person in sight.

Days go by as he wonders what happened.
He figures out the real reason of what went on and his heart blackeneds…

He expected to wait more time.
But it was too late as he broke this rhyme.

Waiting wasn’t the option.
He thought it would be easy like an adoption.

He knows it’s the end of the line..
He begins to show the same signs…


The author's comments:
My friends asked me long ago to make a poem about people who commit suicide over love so I did. This explains to not be so late in love... Pleas don't hide your emotions..

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on Jul. 31 2011 at 2:29 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous

Ehhh dont worry man its alright :)

wasps said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:59 am
wasps, Other
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Sorry if that sounded a bit ... lame. But yeah, you get my meaning :)

on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:57 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous

THank you ^_^

wasps said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:23 am
wasps, Other
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You're so so so ... what's the word?? Oh yeah ... amazing! Please keep writing poems, I love them :)


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