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She is so perfect,
so pretty.
They all worship
all that she is.
She takes up his room,
every bit.
He is all hers,
She is his.

I wish I could be her,
so flawless.
God has handcrafted
her kind.
He loves her
no matter what happens,
she’s perfectly polished
and shined.

There she is now,
walking past.
I wish she would notice
my care.
I can’t help but cry
when I see her.
The pain is just too strong
to bear.

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wordlover27 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 8:19 am:

I can totally stinks when it seems that someone is prettier and more popular than you are... :/ Great job!

Could you check out my poem, "The Dance"?

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Sept. 5, 2011 at 3:42 pm :

It was so beautiful.  I loved the metaphors and similes you used.  Very creative.  And the last line was like, "BOOM!".


Check out more of my stuff if you like.

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